In the out back I hear bouncy kangaroos jumping around the meadow.
I feel the silvery glittery sand tickling against my feet.
I taste the salt water in the shallow sea.
I smell the cute koalas fluffy fur.
I see bouncy kangaroos and cute fluffy soft koalas.
My favourite place in the world is Aussie, in Bundaberg.
Hi Gemeve it me again Elham.
ReplyDeleteI really like the poem about Aussie and the 4th line is really cute and funny.^_^
Have you ever been there?
Bye!
Hi Gemeve!
ReplyDeleteAshrita here, this is a great Information report about Australia.
Lot's of descriptive words you used for this piece of writing, I like the line where you said:I feel the silvery glittery sand tickling against my feet.
Question what else do you like about Aussie?
Maybe next time you could change the color of the words because it kinda hurts my eyes 'u'!
Well cay later!
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DeleteI like aussie becouse my mum is form there and I have gone there when I was little
DeleteHallo Gemeve Nevaeh here.
ReplyDeleteThe thing you did will was how you described the koalas and kangaroos. The thoughtful thing is how you did start of the saints with a Capital then the names some. Next time yous capital for the animals great job anyways Bye.