I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
hi Gemeve my name is Abdula Im from Owairaka rm 6 liked the way did the story but there was one story. is this your first draft are gonna proof read it
Kia ora Gemeve, My name is Luca in room six at Owairaka primary school I liked your presentation because it said helped you develop a proper skill mindset about what you want to do when you grow up. Maybe next time instead of publishing it straight away you could proofread it next time. If you would like to see my learning copy and paste this link https://odslucat.blogspot.com/
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Nice writing I Like the story's
ReplyDeleteHi Gemeve its Ian.
ReplyDeleteI liked the Perfect Pet story.
Maybe next time you could add why you posted this on your blog.
Did you like writing this.
Kind regards Ian.
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Deletehi Gemeve my name is Abdula Im from Owairaka rm 6 liked the way did
ReplyDeletethe story but there was one story. is this your first draft are gonna proof read it
Kia ora Gemeve,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Luca in room six at Owairaka primary school I liked your presentation because it said helped you develop a proper skill mindset about what you want to do when you grow up. Maybe next time instead of publishing it straight away you could proofread it next time. If you would like to see my learning copy and paste this link https://odslucat.blogspot.com/