I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora, Milla here from Gilberthorpe School. I liked the way you have made your ideas on a google drawing! Did you think about making it more colorfall. Next time you could Add more things. Good day : Milla
Kia. Ora I am cayleigh from gilberthorpe school. I enjoyed the part when you did the big slurp and the dran it is really great. Did you know what your onomatopoeia was. I want to know what you know about onomatopeia.
Kia ora my name is Ethan H from Te Rōpū Manawaroa, I loved this because it is onomatopoeia and it is a good word for it to.So it is a tap running or dripping from running.this gave me a memory or when I done my onomatopoeia.Next time you could work on you picture spelling.But it is really good so bye!
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Kia ora, Milla here from Gilberthorpe School. I liked the way you have made your ideas on a google drawing! Did you think about making it more colorfall. Next time you could Add more things. Good day : Milla
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ReplyDeleteKia. Ora I am cayleigh from gilberthorpe school.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when you did the big slurp and the dran it is really great.
Did you know what your onomatopoeia was.
I want to know what you know about onomatopeia.
ReplyDeleteit olivia Wow you knockek my socks off when l read your post l learnt Great!l like how you...it and your cool work
Kia ora my name is Ethan H from Te Rōpū Manawaroa,
ReplyDeleteI loved this because it is onomatopoeia and it is a good word for it to.So it is a tap running or dripping from running.this gave me a memory or when I done my onomatopoeia.Next time you could work on you picture spelling.But it is really good so bye!
Hi Gemeve Jesse here I like your onomatopoeia but maybe add more onomatopoeia like boom pow like that. BLOG YOU LATER!!!
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