I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Gemeve i liked the instering facts about maui slowed the sun down. text time you could put a backround. Eney ways i was blowed away from school. Blog you later
hi its brodie here i liked the way you have caps at the start at your sents.The facts you have used are really good.why did you put this on your blog? bye.
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I think your heading is wrong. It says Values but this is a Reading post.
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ReplyDeleteI liked that you put lots of information and detail into the post, next time you could put what you need to work on next time.
Hi Gemeve i liked the instering facts about maui slowed the sun down. text time you could put a backround. Eney ways i was blowed away from school. Blog you later
ReplyDeletehi its brodie here i liked the way you have caps at the start at your sents.The facts you have used are really good.why did you put this on your blog? bye.
ReplyDeletekia ora its nikau.i like the interesting facts about how maui slowed the sun down.
ReplyDeletehay its benaiah
ReplyDeletei liked the way you put the pic on the front
did you know i love facts about maori
nexts time you can put more pics
see yah
that is very cool
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