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Monday 3 July 2017

fidget spinners

                                                  fidget spinners                                                                                                                 believe that  fidget spinners  should not be allowed in the classroom. I will give you 3 reasons why I believe that  fidget spinners  should not be allowed in the classroom
  • They  are so distracting because you look at them too  much  and you look around and wonder what the nose is it is horrible and   don't get any work done.
  • They are so annoying because  they can cause too much trouble  and arguments because they make too much noise and injure you by when it spins too fast it can hurt you.
  • you can ditch them because you accidently drop them and someone can steal them.                                       
That is why I  believe that fidget spinners should not be allowed in the classroom.

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2 comments:

  1. Unknown3 July 2017 at 09:55

    Good work Gemeve. My favourite point is that they are distracting, I think they definitely are too! Next time make sure you read back through. In your introduction you have repeated your idea! Your writing would be more persuasive if you just say your ideas once :)

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