fidget spinners believe that fidget spinners should not be allowed in the classroom. I will give you 3 reasons why I believe that fidget spinners should not be allowed in the classroom
- They are so distracting because you look at them too much and you look around and wonder what the nose is it is horrible and don't get any work done.
- They are so annoying because they can cause too much trouble and arguments because they make too much noise and injure you by when it spins too fast it can hurt you.
- you can ditch them because you accidently drop them and someone can steal them.
That is why I believe that fidget spinners should not be allowed in the classroom.
this is a tug of war if fidget spinners are not allowed the classroom
Good work Gemeve. My favourite point is that they are distracting, I think they definitely are too! Next time make sure you read back through. In your introduction you have repeated your idea! Your writing would be more persuasive if you just say your ideas once :)
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