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Friday, 19 May 2017

the dragon!

    I made this story up I love it my techer               love it I work so so hard      
     The dragon


The dragon is a purple and black,it is a fierce looking dragon He has big spikes on his back and he has big humongous spiky wings..
He likes to sit on a stone and nap. He does this all day long on his rock. He loves that rock, it is like his pet. He has a long wavy tail waving in the air like he just don’t care! He can kill you if  go near or annoy him. He might hurt you or he  might you knock you out. So you better be careful and not go near the fierce looking dragon. Watch out he will hurt you I am  telling you I mean I Am telling you now because you can diy. THE ENDImage result for pichers

10 comments:

  1. Hi Gemeve kaunteya here.Like the story you made up about the dragon but when you said the dragon is a purple and black,didn't you mean the dragon is purple and black can you please fix that.Bye.

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    1. It is purple and black!!!

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    2. thak you david so much

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  2. Good job gemeve but were is your fallstops.

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  3. Awesome job Gemeve but next time you can put some fallstops in.

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  4. Gemeve that was a good and cool picture and writing of the dragon but their is a few stuff that you need to check.

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  6. i liked your story vut yous more adjectives!

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  7. nice story but keep the pictures and put DRAFT if its not finished.
    -David.

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  8. nice story i really liked the story it was really good i liked the every thing

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