I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
hi Gemeve, Mikayla K here, I just want to say that this is amazing work about cats whiskers and why you shouldn't cut cats whiskers. I love that you cat and kitten photos in there. Maybe next time you could have a 2nd look and fix your spelling From Mikayla K
Hello Gemeve, Fenix here. I enjoyed the slide with the Screencastify. Did you think about making the font a bit cooler? To improve, you could make the font verdana type, it would look cooler. Goodbye!
Hi Gemeve this is Skyla from next door,Rata. On your frount page it does not make sence by saying stuff and do not cut their whiskers you should only have one and in a sentence maybe change it
Hi Gemeve. Great start! You have included some cool facts. I like how you have told me how many whiskers cats have, I will need to go and count Frankie's! I wonder if you could add some more facts about what cats whiskers do...
Hey Gemeve, Aryan here checking out your blog! Next time could you put some pictures with the facts? You had lots of good facts in there. Anyways awesome blog post!
Hi Gemeve. I really like how you said what colour cats can be and the photo of the kittens and the cats was really cool and I also liked the fact that you put in about cats have 24 whiskers. Maybe next time you could check your spelling. Did you think about re-reading it?
could you please put better spelling in your story and fix the mistakes that are in there and it did not make any seance please use spell check - David :)
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Hi Gemeve, Milla here, i want to say that your work is amazing about the cats whiskers well done from Milla...
ReplyDeleteHi Gemeve it is your brother here I like how you put a lot of information but maybe you should anid more slides blog you later!!!!
ReplyDeletehi Gemeve, Mikayla K here, I just want to say that this is amazing work about cats whiskers and why you shouldn't cut cats whiskers. I love that you cat and kitten photos in there. Maybe next time you could have a 2nd look and fix your spelling
ReplyDeleteFrom Mikayla K
Hey Gemeve, you have some interesting facts here! Cat's whiskers are pretty intelligent! Is there anything else you would like to learn about a cat?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Gemeve!
ReplyDeleteAwesome work!
Maybe next time you could make sure it makes sense first.
Anyway well done.
Well that's me Emalea!
Hello Gemeve, Fenix here.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the slide with the Screencastify.
Did you think about making the font a bit cooler?
To improve, you could make the font verdana type, it would look cooler.
Goodbye!
Hi itś me Dani. you spell through but nice try on trying to spell that I like that knowledge. Bye
ReplyDeleteHi Gemeve this is Skyla from next door,Rata.
ReplyDeleteOn your frount page it does not make sence by saying stuff and do not cut their whiskers you should only have one and in a sentence maybe change it
well done gemeve but we can not see your screencastify
ReplyDeleteHi Gemeve. Great start! You have included some cool facts. I like how you have told me how many whiskers cats have, I will need to go and count Frankie's! I wonder if you could add some more facts about what cats whiskers do...
ReplyDeleteHI Gemeve it's courtney here & i just wanted to say you need to fix up some words
ReplyDeleteHey Gemeve, Aryan here checking out your blog!
ReplyDeleteNext time could you put some pictures with the facts?
You had lots of good facts in there.
Anyways awesome blog post!
Hi Gemeve I like your side It's just has heaps of mistakes can you please fit.
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Hi Gemeve.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you said what colour cats can be and the photo of the kittens and the cats was really cool and I also liked the fact that you put in about cats have 24 whiskers.
Maybe next time you could check your spelling.
Did you think about re-reading it?
hi gemeve we can't see your screencastify maybye you could change it
ReplyDeletecould you please put better spelling in your story and fix the mistakes that are in there and it did not make any seance please use spell check - David :)
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