I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Gemeve it's Hunter from rata class, I'm just having a look at your blog and I found this post. I like this post because you have included what you found interesting about the video. This reminds me of my Chris Hadfield post, I can't remember if I have posted it or not. Some advice is to have a capital I when it is by it's self. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!!
Hi Gemeve it's Jesse from Rata class and also angus's friend. I'm just looking at your blog and I like it because you have included why you like it blog you later!!!!
that was very interesting and cool the one thing i don't like is there is only one slide more people will look at your slide only if you add more slides
Hello Chloe here I love how you have said what was you favorite part and gave us the video. maybe for next time could you add more of an exsplane more I would love to see if you new what they eat in space. Do you like space? How can you improve your blogg? Bye
Talofa lava Gemeve, Ashrita here! This was a cool video to watch! It's very cool of how you can fly in space cause there's no gravity. Maybe next time you could add about space facts to the second slide? Well blog you later!
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that is very intresting gemeve mabye you could put more slides.
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ReplyDeleteHi, this is a good post but maybe you should put more slides to add more detail. I like this post well done it has a good summary.
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Hi Gemeve it's Hunter from rata class, I'm just having a look at your blog and I found this post. I like this post because you have included what you found interesting about the video. This reminds me of my Chris Hadfield post, I can't remember if I have posted it or not. Some advice is to have a capital I when it is by it's self. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Gemeve it's Jesse from Rata class and also angus's friend. I'm just looking at your blog and I like it because you have included why you like it blog you later!!!!
ReplyDeletethat was very interesting and cool the one thing i don't like is there is only one slide more people will look at your slide only if you add more slides
ReplyDeleteHello
ReplyDeleteChloe here
I love how you have said what was you favorite part and gave us the video.
maybe for next time could you add more of an exsplane more I would love to see if you new what they eat in space.
Do you like space?
How can you improve your blogg?
Bye
Talofa lava Gemeve, Ashrita here!
ReplyDeleteThis was a cool video to watch! It's very cool of how you can fly in space cause there's no gravity.
Maybe next time you could add about space facts to the second slide?
Well blog you later!
Talofa lava
ReplyDeleteso you said there was a vido for this guy brash his teeth but there is no vido but good job thats me for now Nevaeh