I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi gemeve it is lacie. when you said you would tell us 10 of the aniamls you write down 7 & 8 2 times and you did not tell us 10 you told us nine. I like how you said the age and date of birth of the man.
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Hi gemeve it is lacie. when you said you would tell us 10 of the aniamls you write down 7 & 8 2 times and you did not tell us 10 you told us nine. I like how you said the age and date of birth of the man.
ReplyDeleteWell done my girl I'm proud of you x x x from mum
ReplyDeletethanck you so much mum OXOXOXOXOXOOXO love Gemeve:)
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