I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi it's Azire from Gilberthorpe school and i would like to make my own Pizza hahaha just joking this is really cool. Did you think about adding more food?. Next time you could add how much the drinks are and how much the pizza is anyway nice job bye
Bonjour Gemeve, That looks so tasty! Would you buy one, I know I would. Do you think you could make a google drawing of what you think the pizza would look like? Don't you think the pizza is to dear for fourteen dollars? Well anyway great job and see you later!
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Yummy that's a delicious menu I would love to go there. Whats the name? I would really want to know
ReplyDeleteHi it's Azire from Gilberthorpe school and i would like to make my own Pizza hahaha just joking this is really cool. Did you think about adding more food?. Next time you could add how much the drinks are and how much the pizza is anyway nice job bye
ReplyDeleteBonjour Gemeve, That looks so tasty! Would you buy one, I know I would. Do you think you could make a google drawing of what you think the pizza would look like? Don't you think the pizza is to dear for fourteen dollars? Well anyway great job and see you later!
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