I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello Gemeve I am Luke from Owairaka school and I liked your all about me slide and I have some positive and negative feedback First the positive Learning about you was really nice and what you wrote was good and now the negative It was hard to read it because the background was clashing with it and made it hard to see and maybe add a bit more about you
I really like your post but could you please make the text a diffident colour because I couldn't really read it, if there was only 1-2 Friends allowed what about your family? why did you choose those two wishes?
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Hello Gemeve I am Luke from Owairaka school and I liked your all about me slide and I have some positive and negative feedback First the positive Learning about you was really nice and what you wrote was good and now the negative It was hard to read it because the background was clashing with it and made it hard to see and maybe add a bit more about you
ReplyDeleteHi Gemeve
ReplyDeleteI really like your post but could you please make the text a diffident colour because I couldn't really read it, if there was only 1-2 Friends allowed what about your family? why did you choose those two wishes?