I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Gemeve, it's Mrs Pam. This is a good effort. You have mentioned several things to keep you safe near water. Well done. Next time you might like to do a spell check before publishing.
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Hi Gemeve, it's Mrs Pam. This is a good effort. You have mentioned several things to keep you safe near water. Well done. Next time you might like to do a spell check before publishing.
ReplyDeleteWhat good work. It is good to know how to behave around water.
ReplyDeleterelly good tips
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