I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Gemeve it's me Elham. I like how you put the number's next to your top 2. I think you are really good at reading a book because every time I saw you , you were reading a book. Can you put your next step under the screenshot next time?
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Hi Gemeve it's me Elham.
ReplyDeleteI like how you put the number's next to your top 2.
I think you are really good at reading a book because every time I saw you , you were reading a book.
Can you put your next step under the screenshot next time?
maybe next time you could put the picture bigger
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