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Tuesday 11 August 2020

gold poem

Gold is shiny 

Gold was popular 

Gold can be found 

Gold feels soft and hard 

Gold looks like a tin of metal 

Gold buys fake friends 

Gold makes a lot of money 

Gold often is found in rivers 

Gold comes from the West Coast and more

Gold always is heavy

Gold brings joy 

Gold gives money 

Gold has value

Gold will bring happiness 

Gold provides nothing 


Acrostic Poem

Glorious

Organic

Lush

Dreamy


Real

Unlimited

Shiney

Happy 


Gold can be found

2 comments:

  1. I really like your poem especially your acrostic poem the words go really well together. Your top poem was really descriptive by saying "looks like a tin of metal" I think next time you could add a Blurb saying what you had to do.

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  2. hello Gemeve where it says "gold comes from the west coast and more gold can be from Witwatersrand around Johannesburg, South Africa.
    Witwatersrand Basin in South Africa.
    Deepest mines on earth are the gold mines in South Africa.
    Gold mining in Africa. Gold mining in South Africa.
    Gold mining in Australia.
    Gold mining in the United States. ...
    City of Gold in Canada.
    Gold mining in China.
    and good job keep the hard work up :) i like the Acrostic poem

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