I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
That's a beautifully poetic piece Gemeve.. wonderful work! You've been able to provide a sense of how it was for the people in a few well-chosen words like 'Path of war' and 'Invaded the land' ...Hope you'll continue to enjoy and write poetry!:-)
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That's a beautifully poetic piece Gemeve.. wonderful work! You've been able to provide a sense of how it was for the people in a few well-chosen words like 'Path of war' and 'Invaded the land' ...Hope you'll continue to enjoy and write poetry!:-)
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